Hi. I’m Peter. Jenn has been sweet enough to be the host of the first day of my blogcation. This kicks off 7 guest posts on 7 blogs in 7 days. Oh yeah… Sometimes I write word doodles. This is one.
the setting
matters little
with you
windowless room
adrift on a
topaz sea
sunglasses my
only defense
you see through
it
my shit
and call me on it
you like me
more
then you’ll cop too
usually
i think
maybe
letting something slip
once in a while
you don’t know
the weight of your words
i ain’t tellin’
i don’t want
to rock the boat
i just want
to roll you over
every outfit you wear
is my new favourite
colour
on you
and
sometimes
when the light
almost
catches your eyes
it just about takes me back
to a place we got close to
many times
in my mind
and
sometimes
the tongue ties
thewordsjumble
the mind goes blank
and then
and then
your whole face
smiles
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“it just about takes me back
to a place we got close to”
That’s a powerful feeling, ain’t it?
Good one, Pete. I dig it.
Doniree´s last blog ..Head First
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This doodle makes me want to make out…or go on vacation, I can’t decide.
Busty Satan´s last blog ..This is what they call a short fuse
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Love this.
Lindsay´s last blog ..Second Chances
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I never thought I'd get to say this in my entire life. “I agree with Busy Satan”.
That may be the greatest thing I've ever said.
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awesome.
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I want to kiss your writing on the mouth.
The End.
(x2. You know damn right)
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So close yet so far away and maybe not meant to be, but who really knows?
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Ha! I get that a lot.
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